Critics please.

[eXtasY]

Here is presentation i made for faculty, it should put dot on the huge project I've been working on.

http://prezi.com/oj1-ik0wixfx/yellicious/

Just click on play button.

Like it? Any critics?

[sp0k_]

What is this?

[Shoocky3V]

chocolate bar that TESTE (taste) like yellow

[Cen]

It seems legit.

[Leemn]

Just how i see it, maybe you're going for a different approach. :D

-fix grammar, search on google
-consistency, don't write week 1, 2 bigger than the others / some lines with a dot at the end, some whitout
-sans serif fonts
-vectors and real pictures don't go along too well in most cases
-don't do stuff just because you can, like gradients
-use white space to your advantage and try more contrast

[Mrs.Ola]

great presentation. I enjoyed watching it. :happy:
I would eat chocolate with lemon for sure :)

[eXtasY]

Thanks, can you tell me what you used to transform my picture intro so clear one? Gonna fix rest of stuff.

[MiZiGe]

Apart from the freaky person standing next to the board :)
I would however try to accentuate the colouring in the presentation....

[Leemn]

Didn't use anything special, i've just drawn it with vectors.

[eXtasY]

Could you please give me instuctions where and how to do it. Im making logos often and i really need it. Thanks.

[Leemn]

You need a vector program like Adobe Illustrator, Corel Draw or Inkscape. You definetly want your logos to be in vector format.

Are you using some kind of templates to make those presentations? If you're doing them yourself using Adobe Flash Pro, you might wanna look into Illustrator, they work nicely with each other.

For some good in-depth training check out the One-on-One series from Deke McClellend.

http://www.lynda.com/Illustrator-training-tutorials/227-0.html

[OsiRyS]

very nice extasy,i'm sure that you will recive an A+